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The lotus flowers

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The lotus flowers
As great pillars of heaven
Swirls into the skies
A Haiku I have been concaucting for a long time. Tell me what you think.
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i agree with AngelofGod87 it does melt in your tongue that way, but i still love the way you wrote also.